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Photographer: jamari-lior

Model, make-up, styling: myself

Corset: amf Korsets
Horns: shades nosferatu
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

This will be my first critique,

My first reaction to this piece was to stop and take a closer look. So from the perspective of did it catch my eye, I would have to say it succeeded.

The overall vision is very interesting. I like the feeling of an endless sky and giant tree. I like the models position and wardrobe.

For the technique, I like the color pallet and the trees texture. The composition feels kind of muddle to me. I find my eye drifts to the knots on the right of the tree more so than towards the model, which I presume was supposed to be the focus? There is also a foggy overlay on the image that I am not big fan of. It makes me feel like the image is incomplete. The horns on the model I find are after thoughts and look more like rabbit ears than horns. The only reason I know they are horns is from your explanation in the description. There needs to be a bit more contrast behind the model, especially around her head.

For the impact, this image is fairly flat, but it has the potential to be insane! The hard part is going to be finding the pieces. I think the tree and shot should be from a higher angle and there could be a sweeping landscape below while having a dynamic sky above. It would have that wide angle lens effect. I think some green grass (muted) might be worth a try. And bring the model more to the foreground to give her more punch.

Thank you for listening.
JE