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Model, make-up, hair, retouch: :iconophelia-overdose:

Photographer: :iconmoritzmaibaum:

Wardrobe: Westward Bound

Shot on Plymouth Hoe
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

A nice job. The matching of colors is not so good. Let's begin with the background and the lighthouse. The red and white colors, supposedly brilliantly bright and colorful have become dull and bland dark red and yellowed whites. Now, the background looks beautiful with this effect, but there is no correlation to the lighthouse. similarly, the fashion of the woman, plasticized, not simplistic, with an exaggerated expression and confusing proportions (i'd rather have her about the height of the light without the actual light chamber.
Overall, you're great in making objects look great on their own (as in, taking a beautiful picture of the model, another one of the lighthouse) but composing them? making sure all the pieces fit? Try harder next time.
7.5/10