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Nineveh by Ophelia-Overdose Nineveh by Ophelia-Overdose
Photographer: jamari-lior.de

Designer: :iconcexn:

Model, make-up, styling, editor: myself
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:iconmilescochran:
This feels very fashionable in a number of ways, first of all the pose feels very couture runway with the over exaggerated shoulder and shape of the back. That gives it a very "high art" sensibility. I tend to enjoy that though I think it might be lost on a number of people who don't spend time following runway fashion.

I also feel like the outfit itself is really the main focus here with the intricate buckles and leatherwork. You as a model are clearly vital to the image but it feels more about the clothing than the model. If you don't have a good model the clothes will look ill fitted and awkward, so there is a lot to be said for having a skilled model and one who fits the visual style of the clothing. However a good model let's the clothes speak and I think that is what is happening here. That also gives it a very fashionable aesthetic.

I think the makeup and pose are good choices. I also enjoy the backdrop which gives texture but goes away pretty easily. I don't know if this piece would lend itself to being on a more decorated set as I think it would take away from the outfit so I think all the choices here are pretty good.

There are some lighting issues here that bother e (thus the lower technique score). The image loses something in the bottom third, the darkness around the hips and below is not enough to fully remove the area from view but enough to make it very unsatisfying visually. The lack of contrast which makes the top so nice makes the bottom blah.

There is also a warm orange color creeping up from the bottom which I find off putting. It doesn't seem to me to serve a purpose and makes this warm spot where I feel the only warm value should be on the model. The orange is simply distracting, it also doesn't seem to match well with the red, it just seems to make that bottom third really muddled.

Overall it seems like a nice piece that with some lighting changes could be stellar.
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:iconmrlord88:
Mrlord88 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014
Very hot pose
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:iconacecometh:
acecometh Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Sassy. Sexy. And if you need help, ANY help at all getting out of that outfit please, PLEASE!, let me know. I would drop what I'm doing, stop working or wake up at any hour of night. After that, I promise you won't want to change your clothes again without my help again. Yes, I *can* promise that!
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:iconmitia-arcturus:
Mitia-Arcturus Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2011
Dear Friend Ophelias-Overdose
Your Fantastic Artwork is featured in
:iconart-portraits: ...and...:iconaction-portraits:
you are welcome!!! ...:heart:
regards
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:iconmitia-arcturus:
Mitia-Arcturus Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2011
"Match... My brain is up side-down..."
Dear l Ophelias-Overdose one feature more in
:iconart-portraits: ...and...:iconaction-portraits:
become ART-PORTRAITS's member you are welcome!!! ...:heart:
regards
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:iconbiogentech:
BioGenTech Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011
Another great composition: makeup, hair, outfit, pose, background...all work together well. Nicely done.
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:icondeathofatragedy:
DeathOfATragedy Featured By Owner May 11, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The background might be a bit bland, but the pose and the outfit make this flaw very forgiving.
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:iconkioko2010:
Kioko2010 Featured By Owner May 4, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
I love the outfit! You're gorgeous!
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:iconinsanitysqueen:
InsanitysQueen Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2011   Writer
I really like the clothes ^^
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:iconsyarette:
Syarette Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2011
Beautiful composition, costume and colours :heart:
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:iconbunnydollstrawberry:
BunnyDollStrawberry Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice.
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:iconlaszivia:
Laszivia Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
The corset is outstanding but especially I love the make-up, it favors you very much. :heart:
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:iconmichellica:
michellica Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2010
i like the shape you created with your arms.
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:iconzienda:
zienda Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2010
Your makeup looks stunning because it seems different here. Love your outfit.
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:iconsborauysal:
sborauysal Featured By Owner May 15, 2010   Artisan Crafter
awesome
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:icongeanera:
geanera Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2010
Amazing!!!
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:iconnotfake:
notfake Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2010
Everything you do looks awesome..!
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:iconsophie0luna:
Sophie0Luna Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2010
I love your skin. I just love it.
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:iconmehilly:
Mehilly Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2010
I love the make up
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:iconvoltrotz:
Voltrotz Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2010
I loved this dress, perfect!
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:icongg0729:
GG0729 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2010
WOW!!Beautiful^^
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:iconeyeseephotography:
EYESEEphotography Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2010   Photographer
Du bist sooo schön junge Dame
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:iconophelia-overdose:
Ophelia-Overdose Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2010  Professional Artist
ohhh :) danke süße!
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:iconscrattt23:
Scrattt23 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2010
Great shot great pout nice balance in shades meeting you at the middle. Sexy! Sharp and oh so Smart! :smile:
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:iconmllrg973:
Mllrg973 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2010
Very sexy picture, Ophelia!!! :hug: :kiss: ;)
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:iconlovestogiggle:
LovesToGiggle Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Very amazing and fantastic!
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:iconlunaserenita:
LunaSerenita Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2010
Cool dress. ;)
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:iconrgfoto:
RGFoto Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautiful work!
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:icon0oomaxoo0:
0oomaxoo0 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2010
amazing [link]
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:iconhoodlum-girl-rox:
hoodlum-girl-rox Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
This has to be the one of the cutest bondage outfits I've ever seen. Bondage is always sexy of course, but what I love most is this piece is restrictive in the way of leather and straps, yet not as binding as maybe a full body suit would be. I've always loved the asymetrical look, even before it was popularized, and that red is absolutely gorgeous.
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:iconrin-chama:
Rin-chama Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2010
Siehst so anders aus o_o
Aber ich mag's. <3
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:iconengeline:
Engeline Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2010
Awesome as always!
The makeup and the hair are really awesome, but I must say that it looks a bit photomanipulated.
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:iconfemketje:
femketje Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2010  Professional Photographer
gorgeous pose and outfit!
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:iconkomickarl:
KomicKarl Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2010  Professional Traditional Artist
Everything is working on this pieces. Lighting, composition, costume and pose. Well done.

-k
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:icondistorted-plushie:
Distorted-Plushie Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2010  Student General Artist
We really like the makeup!!!!! 8D
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:iconwytherwing:
wytherwing Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2010
outstanding! :thumbsup:
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:icongirl-q:
Girl-q Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2010
She is stunning. The red dress is indeed amazing. The buckles and chain are incredible.
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:iconmoulphary:
Moulphary Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2010  Hobbyist
Beautiful C:
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:iconmarikaejibia:
marikaejibia Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2010
i love this pic, and could u help me and click here [link]
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:iconfuhrmannskoffer:
fuhrmannskoffer Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2010
:heart: your hairdo!!
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:iconvanityinzanity:
Vanityinzanity Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2010  Student Photographer
thats just an amazing outfit and a amazing picture <3 love it
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:iconjuliatbones:
JuliatBones Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2010
you're awesome
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:iconproductofinsomnia:
ProductofInsomnia Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
The outfit is amazing! I love it!
I might actually be inspired..
Would you mind if I were to use this in a later outfit for a character design?
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DaBigBadWulf Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This photo is very well done in my opinion.
The strong lighting sources making yer skin look as if it is made out of porcelain. The deep reds of the leather all over, contrast against the bright paleness of yer body in this photo.
The pose is very strong and sexy all at the same time. With the light casting shadow and bloom where it is most striking. Drawing the watchers eyes to yer own. Which by the way look amazing here.
This brings most of the attention to the top part of the image, where you can see all the intricate makeup and hairstyle details.
Which seem to compliment the outfit just enough, but still feels like yer own style.
It's an interesting balance of soft beauty and tough leather an chains.

The only thing I will say is that, if the image was to kinda promote the outfit, this image doesn't work so well. We are focused more upon you then the image due to the dramatic lighting making you glow, then against the leather and metal of the very detailed and well put together outfit.
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:iconkliwe:
Kliwe Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2010
uuuuuuuh, hübsches, modernes rotkäppchen <3 ^^
ein sehr cooles outfit, gefällt mir am besten atm!
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:iconsurgingchaos:
surgingchaos Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2010
This would even make the most stoic of men break down and give in :P
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:icone-hima:
e-hima Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
It's a really good composition, dead-awesome outfit-- but the left arm is almost too distracting. Perhaps it's my eyes, but it just looks a little too uncomfortable for the rest of the pose.
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:iconsynthvet:
Synthvet Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2010
Yep.....LOVE IT!!!
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:iconroronoaxphantom:
RoronoaxPhantom Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Very sexy!!!
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:icondjomac:
djomac Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2010
Oh I love the colors and shadows.
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:iconfoureyes:
foureyes Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2010
:+fav:!!!!!!!!!!!.......Beautful :heart:
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