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Submitted: April 21, 2009
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Make:NIKON CORPORATION
Model:NIKON D80
Shutter Speed:10/600 second
Aperture:F/4.2
Focal Length:32 mm
ISO Speed:100
Date Taken:Apr 16, 2009, 6:24:06 PM

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Marshmallow Gardenby =Ophelia-Overdose

Photography / People & Portraits / Expressive

Photographer: Starkall

Model, MUA, Editor:

Wig and Skirt made by Ophelia *g*

Critique by ~tRoUbLeSoMecHiCa Apr 22, 2009, 5:31:05 PM

It is a beautiful picture, but it is a little too dark. Lightening it would help. The dress stands out more than your face, but if that is what your going for, it looks fine. Your left arm does not look very natural, as in your wrist looks a little strained. The pink on your gown that is on the ground, looks as in it could be a little farther away that you. It looks a little like you might be stepping on it just a little bit. I don't know if it's just my eyes/computer but your face seems just a tad fuzzy (as in the quality). Overall, the photo is beautiful and a very unique idea.

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Critique by !elize Apr 21, 2009, 7:27:10 PM

i love the styling and pose of the model, but something seems "off" about her relation to the background... maybe more centered or farther to one side? she's just not really here or there to me... i think either centered in this format, or on the side if it was in a horozontal format. i think the lighting could be a little brighter too, esp on the face, and i thought the flowers on the bottom of the dress took away. i love the scenery though, id love to see more shoots like these! maybe with some with the girl closer to the trees, she kindof looks giant compared to them, almost superimposed. the pose and dress would make a perfect stock reference photo too, she's so dainty!