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Her time is running out by Ophelia-Overdose Her time is running out by Ophelia-Overdose
Having the black slime in my mouth felt as if there were thousands of slugs in it ^^




Photographer, editor: :iconhart-worx: | www.hart-worx.com

Model, make-up, styling: :iconophelias-overdose: | www.miss-overdose.com

Assitent: :icond--n--y:
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:iconmilescochran:
The most interesting part of this image for me is the slime coming out of the mouth, it's a gorgeous line and I can only imagine how difficult it would be to get with such a fluid prop. The slime on the hands is equally good though feels less like blood and more like an external slime.

The clothing here looks very much like gauze which I really like but would like to see highlighted better in the image. Also the black hair seems to generally blend into the background which is unfortunate. The hair band gives a very nice contrast and I want more of that to help frame your face. I realize the fading into the background may be intentional though.

Another oddity for me is the shine on the slime in what is otherwise a matte image. I am not sure if i want more shiny parts or to make the slime appear more matte but I do notice the contrast.
What do you think?
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:iconbyronicpawn:
ByronicPawn Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013
Nice picture, but ugh... what is that black slime?
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:icon1mitsymoo:
1mitsymoo Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012  Student General Artist
demonic looking
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:iconheikivaher:
heikivaher Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2011  Professional General Artist
Cool work
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:iconbreebirdtheinsane:
BreeBirdtheInsane Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2011  Student General Artist
is that chocolate syrup?
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:iconpowergirl46:
powergirl46 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Whooo it looks freaking beautifull haha!
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:iconserena1000:
Serena1000 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2011
For some reason I'm fascinated by this =O=
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:iconsketchyone:
SketchyOne Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Der Titel errinert mich stark an MUSE ^^'
sehr starkes bild vom ausdruck ^^
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:iconmpk18:
MPK18 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2011
haha I make the same work for my exam :D
what is the liquid in your mouth?
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:icongejm:
gejm Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2011
That black slime coming from the mouth looks great
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:iconcyclist74:
cyclist74 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2011
der blick ist der HAMMER.
was für zähes zeug hast du da benutzt?
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:iconkcmasterpiece321:
KCmasterpiece321 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2011
I love this picture. Awesome work on all your parts.
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:iconlynzinitus:
lynzinitus Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
omg... that is so freaky... :omg: ... I love it! :heart:
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:iconxoruhtra:
xoruhtra Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Featured in my journal! [link]
:)
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:iconbexa-rose12:
bexa-rose12 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2011  Student Photographer
Great picture ^_^ it looks really cool!! (:
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:icontengai:
Tengai Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
what's that black material?
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:iconkocia678:
Kocia678 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Looks scary, but very niiiice :D
I love it ^^
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:iconkfc24gordon:
KFC24Gordon Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2010
haha very cool
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:iconkillerkitty-mau:
killerkitty-mau Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2010
Red blood is overated...
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:iconpullingcandy:
pullingcandy Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Just a quick message to inform you that your piece has been featured in the A, B, C's of Horror under the letter "Y". Y is for Yin-Yang, after all.
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:iconicega:
Icega Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2010
die Künstlerin ist zurück! <3
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:iconsuicidedrug:
suicidedrug Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2010
Heh.
I remember when I bought this black toy slime.
Disgusting yet funny.
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:iconbunnydollstrawberry:
BunnyDollStrawberry Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Looks very cool though. But I can see your point. Though I want to kow how this was done. Yet again a simply wonderful piece
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:iconmrs-mad-hatter:
mrs-mad-hatter Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
in a lot of ways, you bear a resemblance to Billie Piper...I think you are absolutely gorgeous and the slime gives a nice, grimy feel I like it
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:icon89-raw-89:
89-RAW-89 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2010
Your awesome Picture is featured here;);)

[link]
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:iconinvisigoth202:
invisigoth202 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2010
freaky cool
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:iconkiwifromoutherspace:
Kiwifromoutherspace Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2010
Very nice idea with the slime :)
And the look on your face is, oh,SO fitting x)
Beautiful :3
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:iconsorrowscavenger:
SorrowScavenger Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
i featured your work here:
[link]
:icontardboogieplz: :iconyaysupplz: :iconveryexcitedplz:
be sure check out other featured works :)


if, in some case, you want me to remove it - let me know.
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:iconmewzakuro123:
MewZakuro123 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2010  Student General Artist
I have to say that this is amazing!
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:iconchangiz:
changiz Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
nice nice nice
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:icondesigntypegeek:
designtypegeek Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2010
It would look good if it was colourized red for blood too. Great work to both of you.
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:iconsatanslittleangel666:
satanslittleangel666 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2010
That's so gothic I like it !:-) like tim burton a little
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:iconthe-butchers-bride:
the-butcherS-bride Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2010
this is stunning!
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:iconshadowservant352:
shadowservant352 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2010
awesome pic
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:icongemmillw:
gemmillw Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2010
repulsed and titilated, those huge eyes grab you. Hold you. Must look away....
Beautiful use of color muting to look like black and white photo; just enough colour again to grab you. Beautiful image.
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:iconre-aktor:
re-aktor Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Is this the OilSpill?
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:iconmustart:
mustART Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2010  Professional General Artist
Fantastisch! Der Blick.
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:iconstridersyd:
StriderSyd Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010
....and that's not the only thing!
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:iconwikirat:
wikirat Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010
Ewww! Nice though!
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:iconaborro:
Aborro Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
You're lurking your way back into my favs!
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:iconyungdeep:
YungDeep Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010
Looks grand! The liquid is done well, it looks almost real! Great work, and the expression is fabolous for this peice.
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:iconchrischaaan:
chrischaaan Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010   Traditional Artist
great shot! freakin weird luv it!
Gruß aus Berlin Chrischaaan
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:iconkaotikangel666999:
Kaotikangel666999 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010  Professional Traditional Artist
wow i love the sludgestuff!!!
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:iconmillymakebelieve:
millymakebelieve Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010
I adore this.
There is such a beauty displayed in this which is really difficult to understand. You are such a wonderful model, you never cease to amaze me.
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:iconmgroenne:
mgroenne Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010
GREAT :)

was habt ihr als slime benutzt?
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:iconkatije2:
katije2 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010
i like your expression!
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:iconpsychosomatic-psyche:
Psychosomatic-Psyche Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is so fabulous! It's a bit scary too, but still, it's proper good! The expression is the best part I think...
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:iconjsantiagogutierrez:
jsantiagogutierrez Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010   Digital Artist
My good!!! I like this picture! The concept is wonderful!
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:icontodesfuchs:
Todesfuchs Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Und ich wollt grad fragen - ist der Schleim gephotoshopped? xD
Ich glaub dir, dass sich das widerlich angefühlt hat x'D
Das Bild aber ist gut, die aufgerissenen Augen super!
Realistischer hätte ein cniht ganz so gleichmässig aus deinem mund laufender shcleim gewirkt...aber ist auch so gut :)
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:iconterrific-tampax:
Terrific-Tampax Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2010
wow
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:iconcrafter0678:
crafter0678 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2010
You are my favorite deviant artist on here. My phones background is one of your photos.
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