I have been a fan and devwatcher of you for a few months now and I love your modeling. It's edgy and different. This photo is supposed to represent Lust, but when I first opened my browser to it that was not the message I was given. To me this reads more sexy than Lustful. You are a fantastic model, but I personally believe Lust is better represented by curves. To make this Lust photo better I recommend showing your neck and looking down at the camera. Also, maybe leaning back or arching your back a little. Your back seems very slouchy and curved. I think it would be beneficial to create a more rounded curve in your midsection rather than the slight "m" shape. I love the soft colors against your jet-black hair. and one thing that I believe gives this photo an extra kick is the stockings you are wearing. Very beautiful. Keep up the amazing work!
Captain-BoeFeatured By OwnerMay 17, 2009Student General Artist
it's great and all, but the way the hair falls over your shoulder bugs me. I like everything to be neat (which isn't really a good thing), and stray hairs, to me, makes everything seem messy and hard to look at.
the rignt breast could be more likely to move forward. This will emphasize the move of the right arm (grasping the bra strap). It seems like, pulling the trap to the back, however if it would be other way it will like tearing the strap. Left hand is perfect in the means of movement and the position. It is in the right position not more not less. And the hair comming from right is not much enough to be seen good. There can be two options one; no hair two; more hair. I would prefer the second since this will increase the power of the look as well (I think). The angle is perfect, background is perfect, lovely colors.
A lovely photo as always. Only one thing bothers me ever so slightly and i do mean slightly. Its the way you have the right arm posed grasping the bra strap, I'd have liked to have seen a bit more of the arm. As it is, it looks a bit awkward. Maybe having brought the arm forward a bit more would lessen that effect. I normally don't critique. So I hope I was helpful.
Wow, so much feeling! The close, cramped picture style makes me think of it as a very personal shot, but the pure white of everything adds a naughty sense of purity. It looks like a classic sort of lust inducing shot... and then I see the black ball gag, and the entire shot changes entirely, but I can't quite figure out how. Beautiful, I feel like I can see different things in it, and others might too...
The outfit and makeup are stunning, but what really makes the shot, is the pose. It's amazingly expressive; it really conveys the feeling of raw lust and desire. I never understood why sexuality is seen as "dirty" and "cheap", I think it's a beautiful, artful thing!
I feel that the depth of field is too shallow. An just a bit on the desaturated side to the point where you are starting to lose detail. The framing is excellent though! And of course you do an awesome job in front of the lens.