I have been a fan and devwatcher of you for a few months now and I love your modeling. It's edgy and different. This photo is supposed to represent Lust, but when I first opened my browser to it that was not the message I was given. To me this reads more sexy than Lustful. You are a fantastic model, but I personally believe Lust is better represented by curves. To make this Lust photo better I recommend showing your neck and looking down at the camera. Also, maybe leaning back or arching your back a little. Your back seems very slouchy and curved. I think it would be beneficial to create a more rounded curve in your midsection rather than the slight "m" shape. I love the soft colors against your jet-black hair. and one thing that I believe gives this photo an extra kick is the stockings you are wearing. Very beautiful. Keep up the amazing work!
Whoa that is a sin to kill all me as for that is the sweet spot. What the Critque missed was that this had high impact, I mean come on I think the people can vouch. -SMK
This photo is supposed to represent Lust, but when I first opened my browser to it that was not the message I was given. To me this reads more sexy than Lustful.
You are a fantastic model, but I personally believe Lust is better represented by curves. To make this Lust photo better I recommend showing your neck and looking down at the camera. Also, maybe leaning back or arching your back a little. Your back seems very slouchy and curved. I think it would be beneficial to create a more rounded curve in your midsection rather than the slight "m" shape.
I love the soft colors against your jet-black hair. and one thing that I believe gives this photo an extra kick is the stockings you are wearing. Very beautiful.
Keep up the amazing work!
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