Beautiful picture. The only thing i don't like about this picture is that i find my eyes looking at the room and not you which is rare because your always the focal point. The room might overpower the picture of you because there is so big and it almost overpowers you. You kind of fade in with the room rather than being the main focal point. This is the first picture of you that i have ever noticed that happening in. Normally no matter what is going on my eyes notice you and you are the focal of the picture.
The model and the photograph are both beautiful and detailed, but it might help clear the focus of this if you were to crop this just to the edge of he lounge chair. Then she is a third to the right but you can still see where she is looking and that line of perspective. Then if you bring the top of the crop down then it will keep your photograph from looking too square. Also it will again help bring a better focus onto your model. Sometimes having something dead center makes it less interesting. But this is an amazing photograph!