I actually dont think these lines im gonna write as critiques, i merely think these are only tips and advises for better improvements or notes..
I actually and honestly love this piece ! looking at it feels like giving my eye a feast of ecstacy (sorry if its exagerated)
Her Hair, Her Make up, Her Wardrobe, all going in a smooth balances.. + her great expression giving the main object of this picture a Breath.
The Composition, the smart placing of props as a Foreground (Bokeh) the Background, all gone smooth in balance as well. Giving a Feel of comfort to the eyes of us, the viewers.
The Post-Processing, is unquestionable, the Colours go Smooth.. The Tone is in check, not too Harsh not too Soft. The Choice of White is perfect, as in contrast of Reddish. The Contrast in those gives an impact to the eyes.
About Originality, yes i have to aggree that it is often seen a picture like this but i think that's okay and pretty Normal seriously.
IMHO : The Only thing that makes this Artwork only gets "Almost Perfect" not "Perfect" for me is because of the hands of the Model. If only it's not empty, wear a glove, or maybe a ring, or at least a nail polish ! it might be the last key to give the "Perfectness" to this Artwork !
But speak no more, it's really an astounding piece of artwork. Congratulations for all the Team in creating this artwork. my Special regard to ms.Ophelia (i'm 1 of your fans) + Favorite !
Wow. This is magnificent. I'm quite new with writing critiques, but I have to say, this is incredibly beautiful and I just have to let my feelings pour out. XD
For starters, I have to say that this really caught my eye. I am a fan of this style of photography, but WOW did you REALLY fascinate me with this piece... Her facial expression and the way that her hair goes against her pale skin is just beautiful and dare I say perfect. Everything is so pastel and it goes so well. Nothing seems to clash and the imagery itself truly gave me goosebumps.
The originality of this is pretty close to completely original, I must say. The only reason I wouldn't call it completely original to begin with is because of the style that your photo is going for has been done before. It reminds me somewhat of a Sweeney Todd/Alice in Wonderland cross over... not sure why, but it does. It is truly beautiful though and that's no a problem at all. :3
The technique is beautiful. The lighting, the colors, and the angle at which everything seems to be overlapping is just astounding. One of the things that really caught my eyes was the wallpaper in the background (is that wallpaper? It looks so real!) It is really pretty and that style of decor really matches with the feel you're trying to give this photo.
The impact was brilliant. Truly, it really gave me a marvelous feeling when I first saw this. I hardly ever stop to truly marvel over a DA photo, but this really just could not be ignored. It is beautiful and deserves much more attention than it is getting already. <3
I actually and honestly love this piece !
looking at it feels like giving my eye a feast of ecstacy (sorry if its exagerated)
Her Hair, Her Make up, Her Wardrobe, all going in a smooth balances.. + her great expression giving the main object of this picture a Breath.
The Composition, the smart placing of props as a Foreground (Bokeh) the Background, all gone smooth in balance as well. Giving a Feel of comfort to the eyes of us, the viewers.
The Post-Processing, is unquestionable, the Colours go Smooth.. The Tone is in check, not too Harsh not too Soft. The Choice of White is perfect, as in contrast of Reddish. The Contrast in those gives an impact to the eyes.
About Originality, yes i have to aggree that it is often seen a picture like this but i think that's okay and pretty Normal seriously.
IMHO : The Only thing that makes this Artwork only gets "Almost Perfect" not "Perfect" for me is because of the hands of the Model. If only it's not empty, wear a glove, or maybe a ring, or at least a nail polish ! it might be the last key to give the "Perfectness" to this Artwork !
But speak no more, it's really an astounding piece of artwork.
Congratulations for all the Team in creating this artwork.
my Special regard to ms.Ophelia (i'm 1 of your fans)
+ Favorite !
For starters, I have to say that this really caught my eye. I am a fan of this style of photography, but WOW did you REALLY fascinate me with this piece... Her facial expression and the way that her hair goes against her pale skin is just beautiful and dare I say perfect. Everything is so pastel and it goes so well. Nothing seems to clash and the imagery itself truly gave me goosebumps.
The originality of this is pretty close to completely original, I must say. The only reason I wouldn't call it completely original to begin with is because of the style that your photo is going for has been done before. It reminds me somewhat of a Sweeney Todd/Alice in Wonderland cross over... not sure why, but it does. It is truly beautiful though and that's no a problem at all. :3
The technique is beautiful. The lighting, the colors, and the angle at which everything seems to be overlapping is just astounding. One of the things that really caught my eyes was the wallpaper in the background (is that wallpaper? It looks so real!) It is really pretty and that style of decor really matches with the feel you're trying to give this photo.
The impact was brilliant. Truly, it really gave me a marvelous feeling when I first saw this. I hardly ever stop to truly marvel over a DA photo, but this really just could not be ignored. It is beautiful and deserves much more attention than it is getting already. <3
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