I'd love to see something done with the legs -- more period-specific stockings, maybe, with garters, since they look a little plain in contrast to the rest of the costume. My biggest issue is with the black eyeliner; it seems a stark, and not really in keeping with the rest of the theme -- I'd be interested to see it done in shades of gold and brown. Lastly, some accents of a faded rust/red to complement the stripes on the chair cushion and the dark wood. A little shop touchup would be good on the corset busk, to fade out the dark reflections on the metal eyes.
The picture is so full of creams and warm peaches and browns, those few spots of true black stand out a little jarringly, and interfere with a piece that's otherwise wonderfully soft and elegant. The gold of the bells and jewelry stand out wonderfully, as does what looks like the butterfly (?) motif by your lap. A little toning on the hairpiece in front would help, since that shade of gold is a little more yellow than the rest.
The picture is so full of creams and warm peaches and browns, those few spots of true black stand out a little jarringly, and interfere with a piece that's otherwise wonderfully soft and elegant. The gold of the bells and jewelry stand out wonderfully, as does what looks like the butterfly (?) motif by your lap. A little toning on the hairpiece in front would help, since that shade of gold is a little more yellow than the rest.
All in all, very lovely -- well done!
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